Predator fans, tell me what you think of this.

[Dajistano]

This is the prologue to a Predator fan-story I'm planning to write shortly. It's still in the first beginning stage, and I'll probably make several revisements later on.


Korbachevsky, a prison in desolate northern Russia, houses some of the most dangerous men on Earth; killers, rapists, thieves, psyhopaths... But after a bright steak of light in the sky and several gruesome deaths shortly after following, suspicions arise. But no one can be placed at the deaths. The prisoners are in their cells and the guards watching them. When an armed team is sent out to investigate, only one blood-splattered survivor comes back telling incoherent stories of the 'demon.' Bewildered, the management sends out a call for a military group to land at the prison. Two days later, the platoon arrives... and finds nothing but blood and weapons. And strangely, all of the prisoners quivering in their cells and civilian prison employees huddled together in a back storage room alive, with no sign of the armed guards except for what little remains of their bodies scattered along the floors and walls.

[Yig]

Sounds interesting. [img]smile.gif[/img]

What year is it?

[Dajistano]

I originally wanted 1996 or so.

But I've decided to scrap the story because I've been told over at the white board that there's already a comic book with a Predator in a prison.
"Predator: Race War" it was called.

[Slytherin Snape]

Hey, I think it sounds cool. And if you haven't read the story that is already out there I say you still do yours. Just 'cause the idea is similar doesn't mean yours won't be better! [img]wink.gif[/img]

[toymank]

yeah, sounds pretty fucking good so far man! [img]biggrin.gif[/img]
you should continue it!

Damn I need to go buy some old Pred comics [img]biggrin.gif[/img]